rate_review Reviews

AWWW! They screwed like little bunny rabbits. It was so sweet. (Just being a little sarky... menstral crankiness.)
It was well worth the wait. Hermione seemed happy with it. Severus seemed more than happy too. I loved how Hermione stayed Miss Bossy-Boots during the lovemaking and barked orders. Very Hermione.
I loved your line about the unimaginative writer and the soap opera that had been their courtship. I personally think you have plenty of imagination Barrie.
Cheers luv!

I had to read both chapters twice, they were so good! This was certainly worth the long wait . . . I love emotionally uplifting sex scenes, LOL. By the way, I howled at this:

Ah.. the lemons... *speechless*

I ended up laughing with the \'lessons\'... that part I like very much, wonder what the other lessons are. I feel pity to Ron\'s and Victor\'s future wives too... Hermione was very frustrated... and here I thought she\'s the virgin.. LOL, Griffyndor\'s courage indeed.

Anyway, I wonder why Dumbledore didn\'t do anything... don\'t other people in that place botherir air attention elsewhere? I was wondering if you\'re going to end it here though.

I tip my hat to you and your beta, a job well done these two later chapters. *grins*

So many reviews I feel I will get lost in the accolades.

Very mutli-layered lemons here, nicely done.

When you write lemons, you write LEMONS. Wow!

Chapters 41 & 42... AMAZING, BEAUTIFUL, SENSUAL, DEMANDING, FANTASTIC, INCREDIBLE.... there are so many more words that could be used to describe this which was WELL WORTH THE WAIT!!! HOLY MY,se 2se 2 chapters were PERFECTLY FABULOUS!!! I so love the way that they meld together!!! There is so much caring & love, not to mention the introduction of Hermione, call me Miss Demanding, Granger!!!

I LOVE this story & if you haven\'t figured that out by now, my reviews must really suck;-) THANK YOU for putting up these 2 chapters tonight!!! Til chpater 43, Deb >^..^<

You probably don\'t want to hear criticism...I\'m sure you don\'t. Let me say that I think this is a wonderful story and that you are a very gifted writer. Please, please don\'t get upset with me.

I don\'t like the cat animagus thing. To me, it feels like a secondary plot in an otherwise beautiful story - like something tacked on. Isn\'t everything complex and wonderfulugh ugh without having to introduce a new contrivance? It just feels *wrong* to me, and I think the story would be better off without.

Love the lemons, love your writing, love your depiction of the characters. I *especially* love the Ron/Severus friendship...how rare in fanfic. Just don\'t like the cats.

I have no words to describe this. I have goosebumps all along my arms, it was that good. Not just the consummation/act of finally getting to it, because s fas far more than that. You infused this with so much \"true\" emotion and feeling that it makes the reader reel.

Absolutely bloody fantastic,

- Eva

your lemons were loverly, dear. your entire story is amazing and you keep outdoing yourself every chapter
xoxo
...me...

Oh dear writer, that was so beautiful! That was so romantic and yet steamy at the same time! Well done!