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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 38... Though I didn\'t expire from the suspense, I felt as if I was on the brink a couple of times;-) Another WONDERFUL chapter!!! I am glad to see that it is now over!!! I bet that Hermione will be a bit upset that she didn\'t get to Harry in time, but if she hadn\'t tried to reinstate the wards, things could have been quite bad for the castle!!!

I really like how you threw in the bits of humor from Hermione about Salazar & Draco & the comment Severus made to Miss Mintage!!! It was a very comfortable diversion from all of the combat, worry, pain & sadness!!! I really do like how you wroteazarazar by the way!!!

I am glad to see that things are on the mend for Ron & Lav!!! It\'s amazing what a little war can do to a person\'s train of thought towards someone they love!!! Nice to see that Miss Brown\'s tras bas back on track!!!

Can\'t wait to see what happens now!!! Til chapter 39, Deb >^..^<
person Deeble
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really, really, really good. I laughed at \"Snark Through the Ages\" and winced at Lavender\'s injuries and cheered the maurading Hufflepuffs (never piss off the loyal and hardworking). I felt like I could *see* the battlefield -- the survivors covered in the blood of friends and enemies alike.

The way you ended it seemed completely original -- I\'ve never read a fanfic in which the reader has a view of the battle without a front-row seat for Voldemort\'s death -- and it worked so well to *hear* the end instead of seeing it.

So what\'s next? A shower followed by snogging? ;-)
person spaz141
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! they won, they won...or did they? thanks.
person GlindaTrisstt
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
~ Ding dong the Voldee\'s dead, the mean old Voldee\'s dead ~
(sund to the wicked witch is dead while doing a victory dance around the living room)


Glinda
person jkrazed
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You gave me goosebumps. Thank you.
person Ireth
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Yay yay yay yay yay yay yay! *cheers and bounces around happily*
person buttercup
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want to write an eloquent review, but I\'m just completely without words. This is just that good.
person excessivelyperky
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good action, good movement--and the child\'s hand in Snape\'s just the right touchr Har Harry, England and St. George! (ok, Fred too. They are a matched set).

person nesscafe
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh so much going on! Will they all make it out alive?! Will the next chapter see the end of the war?! What\'s wrong w/ Hermione? Is she going to be okay? Ack! Update please! You\'ve left me hangin\'!!!
person sakhara291
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yipe. Supurbly done!

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