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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person spaz141
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks
person Deeble
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope curiosity doesn\'t kill the cat. Regardless, it\'s the perfect name for her.

\"There was a line there that she was completely uninterested in crossing\" made me laugh, and then it made me think: If an witch gets pregnant in animagus form ... urgh, never mind, I see why she doesn\'t want to cross that line.

Oh, and poor Harry -- it\'s got to be hard, knowing that Snape made a better Harry than he did. ;-)
person deblovesdragon
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
795 reviews! Almost 40,000 hits! That is just insane! Congratulations sweetie.

Not to sound too pervy, (okay, I am a LITTLE pervy) but um, is there going to be any cat sex in the future? That is pervy, isn\'t it. I was just wondering because Severus sounds like one sexy piece of tail. Could you describe Hermione\'s cat self again please? Curiosity - cute name. I hope that it doesn\'t kill the cat.

Cheers dear.
person kate
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, at long last -- we discover that Mrs. Norris is one of those rare cats who over-identify with their human hence her dislike for Hermione. What a hoot...

I love how you weave together so many nearly forgotten plot points (feline society and politics, Harry and Snape-as-Harry, Malfoy) without losing the SS/HG thread that must run through the story. Amazing.

I also love the parallel between Snape and Hermione and their surreptitious Animagus activities; how interesting that neither of them have shared this information with the other, yet both (now) know. I will admit to being thrilled over the thought process that Hermione goes through in the \"if I were a Slytherin why wouldn
person spaz141
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* very nice. thanks.
person Bambu
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You captured hte language Severus would use perfectly... \"I have had precicesly two willing partners...\" just priceless. Well done. At least Harry has finally decided to grow up a bit. I\'ve always thought Ron the better rounded of the two, and you\'ve shown that beautifully in this story.
person heartnut
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Thank you thank you thank you. Keep going, you know.
person Brian
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
any fluffier and you could have used it to stuff a teddy bear, but i love it that way. No one has ever developed Lavender into a character in quite this way, and i love that too.
person Kim
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Friendlyquark,

Keep up the great work! I\'m really enjoying the story and can\'t wait to see what happens next.

Kim
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 32... This was BEAUTIFUL!!! I don\'t think Severus could have explained things any better!!!

I really like how you shared with us the way these 4 people feel!!! It is so right for them to be happy!!! Til chapter 33, Deb >^..^<

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