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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Kiristeen
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::romantic sigh:: VEry enjoyable chapter.

I have to admit -- maybe because I\'m paranoid -- that Ron\'s utter satisfaction at the end of this chapter left me just \"knowing\" that something\'s going to happen to either him or lavender. ::sniff sniff::

Can\'t wait for more. (hmmm, seems I say that a lot. LOL)

Kiri
person ancientgirl
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Severus always knows just the right thing to say to calm Hermione. Thank you for updating so frequently.
person Imhilien
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oops, we\'ve got chronic foot-in-mouth disease on the part of Harry! I hope Severus can
effectively console Hermione.

Good luck in coping with your room mate....

Cheers
- Imhilien :-)
person Julie
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is good. Keep it up!
person bansidh
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter! I think the thing that impresses me the most about this story is Ron\'s maturity. So often he\'s the evil nasty git whenever Snape gets romantic. I love that he\'s the first to figure things out and the thought that Snape would listen to him after he changes back would boggle the mind except that you\'ve made it believable to me. On a more specific note, it\'s nice to see Harry get a clue about how rotten he\'s been to Hermione. In short, YAY, thanks for writing and I look forward to updates.

bansidh
person Jenny
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Re: Chap 31. *grins* One almost - but only almost - begins to feel sorry for Harry.
person Littlelo
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull updates as usual! You said in your AN that your roomie is \"in a delicate condition\". :P I have some advice for her. If she has bad morning sickness, tell her to try sniffing newsprint. I know it sounds odd, but it really does the trick for some people. Also, chamomille tea, ginger ale and raw veggies are better for calming an upset tummy than a whole mountain of crackers. Good luck! :)
person excessivelyperky
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There\'s a quote from A FUNNY THING HAPPENED ON THE WAY TO THE FORUM that is relevant here: \"Receive, O Bosom, this noble blade!\" (uttered by the sweet dumb boy hero whenever he screws up, which is fairly often). Harry would likely recognize the context, the quote, and the relevance to his own personal situation. *Plotz*
person spaz141
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
19 and 1/2 weeks pregnant here and still sick. Your story has been a great distraction. Thanks.
Chapter 31 - silly Harry try as he might he just isn\'t a girl. It is so cool that you\'ve made Ron and Severus friends. Love this story. Thanks.
person jordy
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
But but but...why did you have to end it there?? I want to know what happens when Snape sees Hermione!! Couldn\'t you have made this chapter a teensy bit longer and included that?? The suspense is KILLING me!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

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