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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person zebraspots
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I must say that I LOVED this story. I just finished it after reading it all the way through. First of all I loved the line about an \"unimaginative\" author coming with all this. Classic. I thought the battlefield scene was appropriately ghastly, the realism was a bit difficult, but very well written nonetheless. Loved Snape in Harry\'s body, that was well written. And I am glad your Ron was a nice person, I hate it when authors make him out to be a prat. The romance was done in a nice pace, building up and the feelings of true love rang true. Excellent job over all. Now I am off to find more of your works!
person Kathe
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story!
person Lee Swain
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story i really enjoyed reading it. interesting way for them to fall in love, i cannot immagine anything different for them. Great job!!
person kd
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was so nice. I am gonna cry. I am glad that everything worked out exactly the way it was supposed to. Or maybe I am happy that it didn\'t. It\'s nice another side of Snape was to be revelaed through out this novel. Well written and I just adore the name Athena. Very nice. Keep up the writing.
person MysticSong1978
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutley fabulous. You came highly recommended. Very, very funny and sweet. I loved that Ron kept Severus as his friend -- and that RON figured it out!
person DarkFire
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great story. Can\'t keep my eyes from reading it until the last chapter.
person cryingoddess
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
amazing... just amazing.. loved every word :) i loved the harry-is-snape bit the most though :)
person Etherea
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
***Wonderful story!*** That\'s all I have to say. :)
person Inspire
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Rich, radiant, remarkable. Thank you so much.
person Cher
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Sniff**Wipe tears* That was a truly satisfying read, witgreagreat beginning, engaging middle and beautiful end. Thankyou so much for an utterly satisfying read. Well done.

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