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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person SnapeLover
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just found your story and it very sweet, charming, and well written. I like how you\'ve written the main characters. I assume there will be \'adult\' action at some point, but your story is quite believable so far.
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great! As usual.
I have often wondered to myself, what is Draco thinking? Everytime he tries to attack Harry, he is bested. Why keep trying?

I hope your Hermione is going to be okay at the end. She is a smitten kitten. When the truth is out, I hope she won\'t be too crus



Cheers!
person CMW
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How on earth is Snape going to give this up? This is brilliant; I\'m howling. Well done!
person Droxy
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. Only Snape would have used logic against Draco.
person Gwennavierre
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully magnificent!!! The \"Harry\"/Draco scene was fantastic and to top it off, he got to hug Hermione! How utterly sweet! *sigh* Now I have to wait again for you to write the next chapter. Please hurry!! (Another long one would be most appreciated! *wink*)

Hugs,

Gwen
person dave gerecke
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sheesh - sucked in by another of your stories.
Now that I have started, you had better finish i I a I am going to have to get on a plane and find you.
(note to self - don\'t buy plane ticket - yet)
I have enjoyed all your stories and hope that this goes in the same vein - a bit of humour, angst, and action.
dave
person ancientgirl
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story more with each chapter. Its so sweet the way Snape/Harry is so attentive with Hermoine. I just hope she doesn\'t hate him when she finds out who is wearing Harry\'s skin.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8...
person LittleBird
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. Severus as Harry against Draco -- too perfect!! You can just smell the fun that Severus is having, and we get to enjoy the ride!!
person Zephyr
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it hehehee. \"Boo\" Priceless.. I would like to see that one in one of the books!! Great chapter I can\'t wait for your next update.

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