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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i\'m luvin this story, please keep it coming:)
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter! I missed it this weekend! Anyways, I think everything is progressing nicely! I was a bit disappointed that Padma, Parvati, and Lavender bailed, but that\'s cool. At least Hermione has Luna and Ginny and the Hufflepuff girls! This is going to be such a great story! I can\'t wait for more!
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dear dear dear DEAR deb. GREAT chapter! Uh oh.....I foresee boils in the Gryffindor common room tonight! Hey, I really like the way you write. And I\'ll look forward to the next chapter on my return! Blessed Be, Kait x
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Explains a lot. And Ron is gettin\' him some. Good for him. Keep it up!!
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I am really impatient to see how they pick the men. Update soon. I have loved this story since you first posted it and am anxious to see where you take the plot :-)
Susan
Susan
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. I can see where this is moving right along to something really interesting. I am VERY interested to read the next chapter. I wonder who the lucky wizards will be?
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad for a first try.
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey I\'m only on chapter 2....but I had to submit a review anyway, this is GREAT stuff.....I do so love the Ancient Ways and am looking forward to reading more. Blessed Be, Kait x
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my....oh, MY. Some wonderful Sex Magick on the cards? I can see where you could be going with this....and I like it.....
More please!
I use this site for translations from English into Latin - http://catholic.archives.nd.edu/cgi-bin/lookdown.pl
It\'s free and I\'ve found it really helpful when writing Mirrors and Puzzles.
Billion BLessings....Kait x
More please!
I use this site for translations from English into Latin - http://catholic.archives.nd.edu/cgi-bin/lookdown.pl
It\'s free and I\'ve found it really helpful when writing Mirrors and Puzzles.
Billion BLessings....Kait x
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool concept. I forsee lots of fun up ahead! Can\'t wait \'til you get the next chapter up.
Maybe you could use abbreviations a bit more, you know like I\'ll, I\'d instead of I will and I would / had, especially when the characters are speaking, it makes the flow better. And also, the phrase \'yanking my chain\' is a bit out of place given that the characters are British, \'taking the mickey\' or \'having me on\' might be more realistic - but that\'s just my opinion. Just a bit of constructive constructive criticism (and really it\'s only tiny little things). Love the story, hope you update soon!
Maybe you could use abbreviations a bit more, you know like I\'ll, I\'d instead of I will and I would / had, especially when the characters are speaking, it makes the flow better. And also, the phrase \'yanking my chain\' is a bit out of place given that the characters are British, \'taking the mickey\' or \'having me on\' might be more realistic - but that\'s just my opinion. Just a bit of constructive constructive criticism (and really it\'s only tiny little things). Love the story, hope you update soon!