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for Teacher, Teacher

by k8gsmith

person Adriana
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I like this! It\'s intelligent . . . and I\'m a sucker for intelligent fics. Afterall, one smut-fic is just like another smut-fic, most of the time. I\'m looking forward to reading more of this one. And all this cooking is really making me hungry . . .
person scifichick774
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG. The bits about her previous exploits - man - I felt so bad for her. And I\'m sure she\'s right about Snape, but there\'s only one way to find out. ;)
person influenza1918
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shellfish? *groan* That was so bad, I think I pulled a mussel.

Mmmmm, things are heating up!
person Rosmerta
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What fun! I\'m so glad you posted the update on WIKTT - I don\'t know why I haven\'t read this before. I love the idea of Severus teaching Hermione to cook (and I do want to try that roast chicken recipe - yum!). Severus on the Internet - a scary thought. Wonder what his handle will be? \"Potions Master\" would be too mundane.... anyway, I\'m really enjoying your well-written story!
person influenza1918
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I roe the day that you came up with those horrid puns.
person Reha
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi- Just wanted to let you know I\'m reading and enjoying your story. You have such a wonderful eye for detail; e lie little touches really add a lot to the reading experience.
person scifichick774
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*happy sigh* I love the slow road to friendship they\'re taking. More soon please.
person raven
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad for someone who has never lived in Europe. For future reference, most grocers in England (or in this case a London suburb) offer carts, but as the average English home has a smaller fridge/freezer than in the US they are normally used less than the baskets. When I lived there (I lived both in London and in a couple of cities to the north) we would shop every two days or so. This may sound extreme, but again-little fridges and small kitchens. The check out in a large supermarket would be like the US, but in Hermione\'s area it is more likely to be a small market if it is within walkiistaistance-especially if, as stated, she has lived in that house all her life. Cash and in some cases, accounts would more likely be used. Land is at a premium so the larger supermarkets (except places like Harrods) are usually on the outskirts of a city or in the newer developments. Obviously this will vary a bit, but the US style supermarket you are protraying I have only found in Porte Ingles and Harrods-both of which she would not be able to go to in such an established area.
person influenza1918
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee! Another highly amusing chapter. No criticisms here and nothing intelligent to say - I\'m just enjoying the fun story.
person Anon
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How can you blame all the puns on me? There is something fishy about that! I loved the interncenecene, I too am occasionally baffled by the amount of misinformation out there. I see that their relationship is progressing quite nicely. :)

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