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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love fics where she is in charge! This is simply wonderful so far. I like that Snape has to learn to be submissive to HER...love the painted toe nails!!!
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2..... Well, I guess I really didn\'t expect such civility from Severus toward Hermione, very nice!!! I think that Severus was very surprised at how Hermione looked & behaved towards him!!! I can\'t wait to find out what it is that he will be learning & what path the togetherness sends them on!!! Til chapter 3, Deb >^..^<
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I rather liked the Arts and Crafts details that you put in there, it gives a great touchstone for her character. Snape at a loss is always fun and I love the idea of Dumbledore as a James Bond fanatic. My only complaint is that there needs to be more of this. I would like to see more chapters, so I can get a real feel for where you are going with this. (Not that I am pushy or demanding or anything.:)
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad somebody took up my chall! I! I thought it would get lost in the sea of others. Of course, I love yourrt, rt, and can\'t wait to read more. James Pond, indeed.
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Completely absorbing ... and this is only the first chapter!
Absolutely love your writing style; humorous, fast-paced and descriptive (list will be expanded on next chapter ;p )
Can\'t wait for more, keep up the excellent work.
Love&Respect
MP
Absolutely love your writing style; humorous, fast-paced and descriptive (list will be expanded on next chapter ;p )
Can\'t wait for more, keep up the excellent work.
Love&Respect
MP
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh!! This is a fantastic start. Im ROTFLMAO at
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was interesting. LOL The phrase I was copying, that applies to my review was
-----Severus Snape was painfully aware oe fae fact that the more obtuse Albus Dumbledore
became in describing a situation, the more distasteful it would be to its participants. Given the description so far, Snape could only assume that he
-----Severus Snape was painfully aware oe fae fact that the more obtuse Albus Dumbledore
became in describing a situation, the more distasteful it would be to its participants. Given the description so far, Snape could only assume that he
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, you can tell already that this will be a good one! And it\'s funny!! Yay! I\'ll be keeping watch on this one. Keep up the good work. :)
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tee-hee! What a promising start! This sounds soooo yummy! I can\'t wait for more! Soon? More??
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This looks really good so far!!! I can\'t wait to see how Severus reacts when he finds out who he will be undercover with!!! Til chapter 2, Deb >^..^<