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Ch 3 - Oh my goodness, I had read this chapter before! I'll just carry on until I come to new chapters, I guess. LOL

Very good!

HI

Great story, I see you seem to be working on \'britishisms\' so I thought I\'d add a few:
1. chips for breakfast is pretty rare - , ba, bacon, sausage, beans, fried bread, mushrooms, tomatos and fried bread are the normal full wack.
2. We don\'t have pasturised chicken and it all comes cling filmed from counters - freezers are always at the end so they would have reached the fresh chickens before the frozen
3. The pound note was abolished a long time ago - now it\'s pound coins with the first note being a five pound one.
4. Chip and pin (i.e. typing in your carmbermber) is very very new in the UK - normally you sign the slip.

Carrie

This story was amazingly sweet.

Wow that was intense! Good writing... great vocab.

great story! very cute.

I absoly lly loved this! \'Three, two, one ...\', \"Professor?\" Too funny! I will remember that one for a very long time. Keep up the good work.

\"She had begun to wonder if there was a conspiracy afoot, propagating the myth of great sex -- a sort of

First of all, K YOK YOU for using \"loose\" correctly, and not throwing in \"lose\" as most people tend to do. ;-)

Secondly, very cool scene with Herm explaining things at the grocery store to Severus. You brought up many things I\'d never thought about before.

Thirdly, once again I loved your snarky remarks:

\"Severus Snape was painfully aware of the fact that the more obtuse Albus Dumbledore became in describing a situation, the more distasteful it would be to its participants. Given the description so far, Snape could only assume that he