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AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! keep this story going...................its wiked good and im dien to read the rest SO DONT STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cool fic at first i thought it was kins of weird with the whole incest thing, but now it really makes sense. I like you plot thus far.... mindless sex, good topic choice, if you need a beta I would love to help you out. just email me if your interested or can\'t find anyone else. Cheers

KagomeRain

This is great! I wouldn\'t have known that English wasn\'t your first language if you hadn\'t said anything! I\'ve read worse by writers who speak English as a first language! btw, i don\'t think your grammar was anything other than good! As i said, i wouldn\'t have guessed that English wasn\'t your first language!And what a brilliant idea! I like it very much! More more more!!!

Good fic. Write more soon!

Cute!!