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for Punishment

by chcgdss

person June
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My only suggestion is that you FINISH THE STORY -- with them HAPPILY TOGETHER! Hey, it\'s not that often you find a guy with as much experience as Snapey, she should go for it!
person erika
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its really good so far. you are great at leaving cliffhangers i am dying to know ... is she pregnant, what whatwhat... i have to know what is goingto happen next. : ) anyway great story
person Jess
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Crabbe eww!, so glad you updated, I am interested to see how long severus can go without her, and what will happen with her and kevin?. Jess.
person Derr
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue...
person Silvana
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think Sev is the phantom as well. He could have overheard the part about the garden. *shrugs* Update soon, please.
person Jess.
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'d say severus is the phantom, his voice is too recognizable , but then again kevin did mention the garden to her, update soon ....Jess.
person Jess.
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update Please!! am waiting to see sev\'s reaction to what she about to do!. Jess.
person Jess.
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Exactly, lets see what sevi would do, excellent!. ...Jess
person your roomie
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hun..... you know how you always bitch when people dont update their stories?? well you are being one of those people and now im going to harrass you every chance i get to update........ and you cant escape me cuz we live in the same room!! HA HA HA HA!!!!
person Anon
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. People like you make everyone else hate the fandom.

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