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by chcgdss

schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As typical as it sounds...I would like to see a love story. Sev fal in love with her. There are plent SS/ SS/HG or (insert cannon character) but very few with him and a character that has been created. If I am missing something here, I am sure someone will inform me. You write a wonderful tale and I look forward to more!
person Frances
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Severus is so nasty!! Hmmm - very nice...!! Keep going!!
I think my only complaint is the chapters are not long enough!!

:-)
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still a wonderful piece! I enjoy every chapter and look forward to more, my dear! ;)
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a very intense story and very nicely done. I am no expert but I know what I enjoy and I very much enjoy this. Please continue?
person MissHighSchool
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE *bes aes around the room* MUST...HAVE...MORE :D kisses
person spartikus
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, i really liked this and i hope that you are going to be writing more? y tha that\'s what i thought. Really want to see what snape can get his slave to do. Can\'t wait for more.
person Frances
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm - keep it going!! Chapter two was awesome!
person Princess
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay first of all you have to keep this story going, it is just to damn good. so on my hands and knees i am begging you to continue this story.

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