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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a bit short..but it\'ll do. you should add more detail next time, and add why harry was doing it, or if he loves draco, or lusts him. basically add a plot line. this is not a flame, just constructive criticism. you really have great potential. keep it up, hunny.
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is rather.. short. Will there be more? This isn\'t ic to the Harry I saw in the novels. Why would Harry raoe anyone? This brief thing is nicely written but just confusing.