schedule
December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter... i loved it :P
Can't wait for more
Chow for now!
Can't wait for more
Chow for now!
schedule
December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope you post more soon!
schedule
December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm it's a good story so far.... but i have seen a few spelling and grammer mistakes but other then that it's a very good story and i know that if you were to look through the story some you too would see the mistakes i am talking about... though if you need help with grammer or spelling (even if i am not the best) then you can always come to me... my e-mail is crystal_rose_winter@yahoo.com
schedule
December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please emore more i would love to read what will happen next ... please more soon ..later for now
angel
angel
schedule
December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
did something happen to chap 8? its so short!
schedule
December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutely freakin AWESOME fic. although i got really pissed off when the lemon just sorta ended. splat. with snape giving harry the boot. like, FUCK YOU OLD MAN! GIVE HARRY A BREAK! AND GIVE ME MY GODDAMN LEMON!!!!!!! *cough* sorry about that, i'm prone to irregular outbursts. anyway, update soon!
schedule
December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When the action is there its really hot...so....back to more smut!
schedule
December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Guten tag:) Newbie here... i read your story in one go (cause its 10:30am and no ones up) but i like it ... your english is good there are some mistakes but i image it was cause by posting rather than yourself :) I didn't expect that last chap but it fits quite nicely... hope that now that you have restarted posting you will get the story going as it has great potential. :D Patiently waiting for next update.
schedule
December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what happened to ypur story? its missing scenes and in some of the chapters more then half of the context is missing! i don't even know what happened in 8 and now 15.
schedule
December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you keep promising lemony goodness! it keeps getting cut short as soon as they get there though! urg. its frustrating. maddening even. both of them are horrible teases. e-mail when you update- please?
borne_shadow_childe@yahooooooooooooo.com
borne_shadow_childe@yahooooooooooooo.com