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for The Forbidden Gift

by Tatiana

person Anon
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Scary - he\'s so cold! The sex was well written but unromantic. Do write more.
person lori
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU MUST CONTINUE! YOU MUST!
person Reba Roget
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO, NO, NO!!! DON'T LET HIM DIE! NEVER LET SEVERUS DIE, I LOVE HIM TOO MUCH!!!

Now you have to write a story just to pull his ass out of the fire, so he can relax a little and have more Hermione. This is not a suggestion. I am serious. I must have my way.

I think I love you, too. But I will still dream of doing horrible things to - oh, my computer, since anything else would be illegal and truly wrong besides - if he dies. I'm off to read more of your work now.

Thanks for a great read!!!
person heather
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would love to know what Hermione was thinking as all of this happens. Please, please, please write it from her POV!!!!
person Delana
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a sad yet wonderful fic. I loved the ending as it was a complete surprise to me. Keep up the good work.
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I defiantely think you should continue this from Hermione\'s POV. Please do!

Tiffany
person a__f
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pursue! Pursue! Definitely!!
person jenbachand
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, as always of course. Very interesting & very dark. Really enjoyed it. I\'d love to see Hermione\'s POV, if you\'re willing, but maybe down the road. At the funeral? Pregnant? Who knows. Wonderful story.

Jen :)
person Venomequeen_83
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excelent! I\'m defentely for one in Hermione\'s point of view, but if you don\'t , could you elaborate on why she was the gift...you do have the makings for a short story hear...sad but good. Keep up the good work!
person Ireth
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Absolutely brilliant. Love the ending and the realisation he comes to. Makes it all plainly clear.

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