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for The Rules of Engagement

by GlindaTrisstt

person purse_addict
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you\'re right, this story is extremely addicting. i was disappointed when i reached the end of this cer aer and there were no more left. PLEASE update asap. you write very well and quite realistically (at least for this s/h situation, anyways.) thanks for a good read.
person carmen
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe. i LOVED that last chapter! very nice indeed. im glad severus is warming up to the idea of having a child w/hermione. i hope they find wut theryre looking 4 to help lupin!!!!! i cant wait to read another chapter. bbbbbbbbyyyyyyyyyeeeeeee
person RamapoThe8r
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am totally hooked on this story! Please continue soon, I can\'t wait to see what happens next. To be perfectly honest, I have no idea as to what Arthur sent Ginny and I\'m excited to find out. I love surprises. My only hope is that we get to see Severus and Hermione as parents for at least a little bit before the end of the story. Keep writing...oh and do you have a beta? Sorry, not to be obnoxious, but I noticed a few errors like words switched around. Nothing major, but my proofreading services are available if you want them. Hope to see a new chapter soon!
person Myrkrida
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello! i started reading your story about a day ago and couldn\'t stop. i love it. i espeacially enjoy the way you developed the characters. even though they aren\'t what Rowling has writen exactly (yet) i can really see them growing up and ing ing out the personalities you\'ve shaped. that is really impressive. i have read many of these stories and i just had to say that \'Rules\' is one of my all time favs!! please update soon. *sigh* i only wish i could write so well. :)

A very devoted fan,
Myrkrida
person TheCook
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love you immensely...if you ever stop writing this fic, I will be sadly disappointed. You\'re relationship development is perfect. I love it. Write more soon b/c i love this story.
person Anon
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter, as usual
it\'s late, and i can\'t really be bothered doing alot, so this is just a reminder that i would be ever so upset if you stopped wriiting and i eagerly await the next chapter
person DragonRose
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dammit! I thought there was more after this one. Damn damn, double damn. Oh well, I hope you are feeling better and will be able to update soon. I look at your pics on the group and they are absolutely lovely. Almost exactly as I would have pictured them in my mind. Sigh. I love it when I find a great author. \'Cause you know you are! You have the characters perfectly in synch with the backgrounds that Rowling provided in the first 5 books. If you were entering this for a challenge I would think that you had it won. keep up the good work, luv.

DragonRose
person exotic-rock-princess
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. Please continue as soon as your able too. Oh and PLEASE don\'t kill Remus off!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 23 & 24... I am so very far behind & am trying to get caught up!!! My reviews have been getting cut off so am hoping that this will all show up!!! Both of these chapters are FABULOUS!!! I love all of the interaction between Severus & Hermione, the good, the steamy, the sad, they are really growing into one another very well!!! I think tht the last scene between them was written PERFECTLY & it was a real heart tugger!!!

I also like how you are expanding on the friendship between Severus & Remus, not only is it touching it is very realistic!!! Another thing I like is the way that you have thrown bits of humor in here & there, gives everything a nice balance!!! I do hope that you are feeling better & am looking forward to seeing what Severus finds at Durmstrang!!! Til chapter 25, Deb >^..^< ///// ///// /////
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a fabulous story. I\'ve been following it for months and I look forward to more.

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