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Chapter 17... I really do like the way that Hermione is comfortable enough to tell Severus what is on her mind!!! He still seems to find it a bit difficult teak eak his mind, but that should change as times goes on!!! I still have a smile on my face because of Severus trying to right things a bei being caught in Hermione\'s bed, too funny;-)

I think the interaction between Severus & Hermione\'s parents is WONDERFUL!!! I also like the way that Tinker seems to have taken to her mother*

Oh no! I can only imagine Hermione\'s dad talking to Wubby...

As far as Rubert Graves is concerned...I\'m inclined to agree. He\'s much more what I had pictured in my mind. :)

Okay, firstly, good chapter, but must have more. I have nothing more to say, otherwise I would just start gushing...

Bugger it...WOW!!! Nicely done. I love the picture that you presented of Severus spluttering and blushing when Mrs. Gra fou found them...it was funny. And absolutely awesome. And I really can\'t wait to find out how Wubby and Mr. Granger get along. I do hope that Severus is pleasantly surprised by it but I\'m not sure if it wouldn\'t be funnier to find Mr. Granger covered in chocolate cake. *wink*

And secondly, Yes, Rupert Graves is exactly what I pictured Lupin would be like. I mean, almost absolutely perfect to what I built up in my mind. But then again, David Thewlis could be an incredible actor and I guess I\'ll just have to wait for June 4...dammit!

All right, well, thank you ever so much for writing this piece as it provides me with hours of entertainment. Thanks!
T

Oh! Rupert Graves would make a splendid Remus! I agree with: Da: David Thewlis is not who I pictured in the role. And I just wanted to say that I absolutely adore this fic. It\'s very entertaining and sweet and very well written! I\'m a firm believer that underneath all that snarkiness, Snape is probably just a lonely, vulnerable soul. I only wish JKR would show us some of that in the books (although I understand that she\'s writing Snape how Harry would see him). And what a cliffie! I love how you\'ve mixed Muggles and House Elves here, it\'s very entertaining. I can\'t wait to find out how Wubby and Herbert are getting along!

Great chapter. I get so excited when I see you\'ve updated, I love this story. Its nice to see Hermione is warming up to Severus and actually starting to see him as the man she will be spending her life with. I can\'t wait to see what is going on with her father. Hopefully Wubby didn\'t turn him into a frog.

Wonderful chapter. Pacing is just right(as always) and it really is a nice take on this challenge. Thanks for the update...I cannot wait to see what Wubby has told Mr. Granger!

Wonderful! Thank you so much. This really is a fantastic story and I\'m so happy to have a little more of it. I guess it will hold me for a while, but I hope you don\'t make me wait too long for more. I\'m gonna go read it again now.

Later!

I\'ve recently read a preference for leaving e-mail addressed by some authors, so I included mine this time.

Excellent update. I am enjoying the way you weave this story. I think your dialogue, timing, and sense of proportion for scenes is good, and I wanted to let you know. I don\'t really have anything constructive to offer because I didn\'t notice any problems. I suppose I could always look harder, but if there were any issues, I was too caught up in the story to notice - which is aplimpliment. I hope to read more from you soon.

Keket

Brill ::thumbs up::

I can\'t wait to find out what Wubby\'s going to do to poor Herbert Granger...

:-O

Kait x

Have I told you how much I LOVE this story??? I can\'t wait to read more!!! Awesome chapter.