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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great, please continue this fic is the best Marriage Law responce by far.
thankyou for keeping me entertained. lots of chocolate frogs
April
thankyou for keeping me entertained. lots of chocolate frogs
April
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I completely fell in love with Hermione\'s father after reading the last few lines. I hated him at first, but now I just want to scoop him up and cuddle him. What a great dad! I can\'t wait to read about their reactions to Wubby. Keep it up!
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WoW! Let me just say that again. WoW! I absolutely love this fic. I love the characters, the plot (I realise it\'s a challenge, as I\'ve read a few of the replies to it, but you\'ve handled it in a lovely way) and everything about it. Apart from one thing. It\'s not finished!
I seriously love the style of writing you\'ve adopted for this, and Severus is a delight to read, as is Hermione (ignore the formal tone I\'m using, it\'s after 4am and I tent to be eccentric at this time of the morning!). Your portrayal of Draco is new, and although I was a bit unsure of some of his reactions (his reaction to having to Hex Rose in particular), I really like him. Oh, and he\'s so shagging Harry! (I hope!)
Great stuff and I really hope you continue *very* soon! (hint, hint, hint)
I seriously love the style of writing you\'ve adopted for this, and Severus is a delight to read, as is Hermione (ignore the formal tone I\'m using, it\'s after 4am and I tent to be eccentric at this time of the morning!). Your portrayal of Draco is new, and although I was a bit unsure of some of his reactions (his reaction to having to Hex Rose in particular), I really like him. Oh, and he\'s so shagging Harry! (I hope!)
Great stuff and I really hope you continue *very* soon! (hint, hint, hint)
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful day, \"You\'ve got it bad, mate.\" :)
Great story, still watching for more updates...
Jeanette
Great story, still watching for more updates...
Jeanette
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee hee. Gotta love Hermione\'s dad and that he catches on quick. ;)
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love Hermiones parents in your story. Sometimes in these marraige challenge stories they are so opposed to the situation and they are a bit rude to Severus, but you wrote them to be very supportive and friendly. I\'m a bit nervous about all these precautions, I hope nothing happens to the parents. I\'t \'t wait for the next chapter and the wedding.
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It would seem that Severus has \'a-parent-ly\' been given permission by Dr. Granger. I liked the whole tension apparition moment as well as Hermione\'s parents. Her mum seems a it flighty, but ultimately common sense oriented. I love the idea that Severus and Hermione are going to \e\' e\' during their engagement -- it wiive ive Lucius opportunity to react. I continue to enjoy your take on this challenge...
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great. Really liked Hermione\'s father giving his blessing \"sort of\" as Severus put it at the end. More soon please.
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
At last an update! They can\'t come fast enough for me! More! More! More! I loved this chapter! I love how Hermione\'s dad is all upset and giving Snape the what for even though he knows that Snape is going to marry Hermione anyways. I thought that was a very realistic reaction considering. I like the end too! Can\'t wait for the next chapter, so get typing!!!
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for the wedding!
Want it see if Lucius tries something.
Enjoying this story very much. I am feeling so sorry for pining Severus.
Want it see if Lucius tries something.
Enjoying this story very much. I am feeling so sorry for pining Severus.