rate_review Reviews

love love LOVE this story. you pulled it off very well. the beginning was kinda slow and uninteresting but i'm glad i kept reading!! anyway i watched this movie called "powder blue" one of the main characters is a stripper. one of her strip scenes automatically made me think of "dark" hermione! the coincidence was just too much to not share. here is the youtube link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s4hLKWfcVSA. also the song she dances to... called werewolf by cat power.. look up the lyrics, wayyy too many similarities @.@

Great story, even after all these years. It was a bit hard to read with the paragraphs not breaking properly and the repeated first sentences. Still, it was compelling enough to deal with its shortcomings. I liked your dark Hermione. I liked that Severus stayed true to his character up to the very end. Bravo.

I loved this story!

That was truly one of the best pieces of fiction I've read in a long time. Your story was amazing. You created a very strong, all-too-human and extremely courageous Hermoine, and it was a treat seeing her in this light. I cried so often, I lost count. It was a total roller-coaster. I wish you would come back and write more stories. I love your writing. Absolutely fantastic. Bravo.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

WOW!!! This was a great story!!! I loved the ending!! Please keep on writting, you have a great talent!!! I don't think I enjoyed a dark story so much. I loved the way you balanced the darkness with happier moments in this story! I'm looking forward to your next story!

Just finished your story and let me tell you I was enchanted by it from the beginning to the end. If you don't mind I am copying and pasting it into a word document and making my own changes. Not to the story itself just fixing it up.
Let me know if you want a copy.
Cheers,
Sonia

Ch. 6 - I am loving this story far, so original in it ideas.
The only problem I have is with the mistakes and the format you have decided to put it in, it can be rather distracting.
So I was wondering if you wanted to email me (kabrax@dodo.com.au) and I could fix it up for you? You know kind of like a beta, but not.
If you are interested, please email me and let me know either way. I bet you can get heaps more reviews.
Anyway I'm on to read more, I will leave another review when I am done.
Cheers, Sonia
p.s. WHY did you have to kill Remus off? WHYYYYYYYY??? LOL I really like him, Sirius and Severus!!!

great story!!! thanks for writing!

This story was bloody brilliant! No lie. I love stories like this. Ugh, it was soo good with the two personalities within her and...asdkfjalskfdj I just can\'t describe how much I love it. Hopefully, you can tell. I love how in the end, it was all about Snape and Severus. Ugh, so gorgeous. Thanks for this great story.