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schedule
January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This really isn\'t that good and is quite unrealistic. *Sighs*
schedule
January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t think that this was horrible. You could use a beta to go over somethings, but the idea of 4 new witches seems good so far. There are some misspellings and grammatical errors, but I have seen much worse. Good luck and keep writing. With help it should become much better!
Cheers,
Susan
Cheers,
Susan