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WHAT! What what what what what!!! No, no, no, no. No. This is not happening.

Yes, it is!
How dare you!
And Carmen, how dare you give the BlueSchmoo such ideas!

Let me calm dowm a bit... and my stomach (still sensitive to that kind of images, but you warned us about torture in your fic, so I assume the responsability of my nausea).

OK. That was definitely not the continuation I expected, and I was... surprised -which is a good thing, I guess. It would be too boring to read stories when you can anticipate the plot, the characters\' reactions... So congratulations! It worked on me. And now I\'m desperate to know how it goes on.
Anyway, still angry. You, evil, evil BlueSchmoo! You let us hanging on such a cliffhanger!

EVIL CLIFFIE!!!! I sincerely hope that this is a dream sequence, cause she and snape have been through too much for this to happen. And if it isn\'t a dream, then how did Lucious find out? Gods this wasn\'t what i was expecting when i started this chapter.

it was good! im just excited that u used my idea, kinda. thanx for updating so soon! i will be thrilled to read more!!!

I forgot.
It makes me very happy that you appreciate my comments. You made me realize I was being very selfish reading fics and not letting the authors know about it. It\'s just fair that if you make the effort to write, we readers make the effort to let you know what we think about it (even though it\'s just one person\'s opinion, and if someone says he doesn\'t like something -that person could be me- it doesn\'t mean it\'s bad...).
As I just said, I can be very selfish sometimes, and so tacteless (kicks my head on the table)! I\'m sorry you had to go through some problems in your life, I hope there was nothing too serious. Sorry again.
Hugs!

thanx for updatin!!!! i was excited to read more! it was to short though so u have to update again soon! i luv u!!!!!!!!!!

OMG!!!!!!! i loved ur story sssssoooooo much! you have no idea.for the past couple of days i read ur story religiously wanting to know what was going to happen next. a lot of your story suprised me and i felt sick reading about the dark revel. i have to admit that you are a genius. i can\'t wait to read more of your story and see how everything turnes out in the end. please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i\'m not done reading the story yet, but i just want to tell you i love it so far!! it\'s amazing! i love loving snape! ican\'t wait to see what happenes next, i\'m ed!!ed!! good job, you\'re an amazing writer! keep up the good work!!

Hmmm. So, is Lucius going to figure out what happened that night? If he does, what will he do about it? I\'m sure he is still dangerous...

About the last chapter, I found difficult to believe the fluff at the end of it. I mean, there has been other fluffy passages in this fic, and they did seem right (to me), but this one, I don\'t know, I found his reaction maybe a little OOC...
Anyhow, I liked the chapter, of course. :)

So the moment of truth has come! Will the potion work? What will be Sasha\'s reaction if it does? And Snape\'s?
So many questions... I hope we will have the answers soon!

After a few minutes of panic -where did my favorite fic go!?-... sigh of relief. So here it is! But not completed, so I\'m slowly re-reading it.
I don\'t understand why they kicked it out ff.net, I am not very familiar whith the english rating (although some are very easy to guess), but I was convinced that R was rating for adults, so I don\'t understand what they mean by \"too much adult\".
Anyway, while re-reading, just let you know that I love chapter 9, I love the way Snape goes from content to anger in so little time, so typical of him, and the way he brushes her hair, mmmm... I remember now I thought maybe the mirror was magical or something (I guess now it isn\'t, is it?).
I have two tiny comments about the last chapters you posted on ff.net, but I will wait until you repost them here...

oh god, this story is so good!! I love the storyline, the way you write...... please update soon