rate_review Reviews

I generally don\'t read HP/HG, but something about the way you worded your summary caught my attention!!! Sadly my favorite man is now gone, but I am glad to see that his life did not end without purpose as he would have done anyway!!! I think that you have the beginings of a good story here!!! I would like to see both what led to this as well as where they go beyond it!!!

I only have one request, in future chapters could you please put a bit of space between the paragraphs so it will be a bit easier to read*