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It\'s interesting.. not as much action in this chapter as there was information. Got to learn why Draco wasn\'t at the battle and etc. >___< I\'m feeling major sympathy for Draco.. *sighs* hrm. another well done chapter.. although i would like some action! *whimpers* hehehe... XD continue soon.. it was way too long.

I love your story! please write chapter 9!

Just wanted to let you know that you have a great story here... please update as soon as poosible, ok? i\'m eagerly awaiting your next chapters.
THANKS!

Please please update. I was reluctant to read this at first but it\'s really great. Can\'t wait to see the finish

Signeus is your beta too?! OMG! No wonder it\'s been taking him so long with all my chapters - lol. He must be busy. I liked your chapter, it seems to have a different, more calm tone, than usual. Sad still, so I am satisfied. The sentence structure is a little off, as is end quotes. You should have \"insert text (comma)\" he said. So it would look like: \"I love you,\" Draco said. You keep ending with a period before the end quote. But that can always be fixed and since you write alot, if you ever need more help, I am here *grins* I\'m a biggie on grammar. Well, good chapter and I look forward to the next.

Your fic\'s really good... and it\'d be absolutely wonderful without the grammar mistakes. If you want a beta reader you can email me-I\'d be happy to help! :)

ooooohh... another great chapter. i love your writing so much i can\'t wait until you post those last two chapters. Please update soon... oh, and i d't s't see too many grammer mistakes, it looks really good. Thank you for posting your writings!
Alex

ooooohh... another great chapter. i love your writing so much i can\'t wait until you post those last two chapters. Please update soon... oh, and i didn\'t see too many grammer mistakes, it looks really good. Thank you for posting your writings!
Alex

evil writer. you and your stinkin\' cliffhangers. please relieve the suspense soon. can\'t wait for the next. keep up the great.

I love this story so much! I think it is great and I wish you would update it more often ^_^