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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i dont mean to criticize, but i believ is is \"tempus fugit\" it\'s been a while since i took latin though.
you have a nice little beginning but perhaps you could add more to the chaps before posting. i know i enjoy reading longer chaps.
you have a nice little beginning but perhaps you could add more to the chaps before posting. i know i enjoy reading longer chaps.
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have such great ideas and though you succeed in creating a scene and setting, you fail to create a story. This could be something great if you keep working on it.
~Ichor
~Ichor