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for The First Summer and Summer Series

by Kronae

person ancientgirl
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great chapter. I love that Severus gave Hermione that kiss before he got on the train. Can\'t wait for the next series.
person Snapeaholic
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAHHHHH!!!!! That was so sad! I do hope they get together in the end after all - hint, hint... :) Very well written and very much heartfelt. Thank you! I can\'t wait to see the rest of the story.
person Adriana
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Waaaaaaah! This is so sad! I was hoping that they could, you know . . . perhaps Apparate to see each other on weekends, or something. But this is much \"angstier\", LOL. I admire how Snape is putting Hermione\'s needs first. What a guy! I look forward to reading more.
person Bambu
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is quite lovely and romantic. I loved the use you made of Neville and the idea of Mr. and Mrs. Smith!
person Adriana
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe I missed this little gem over at Whispers! I\'m so glad you were persuaded to post it here, I\'m just loving it. It\'s very well written and extremely interesting and entertaining . youryour descriptions of the resort make me feel like I\'m right there with them (hehehe . . . I feel like a voyeur!). I\'m also especially enjoying the adult repartee between Severus and Hermione . . . you\'ve managed to make them both endearing and fascinating. Great work and I look forward to more.
person deblovesdragon
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. The first half was sweet and romantic. The second was hot, sexy and romantic. Keep writing.
person IrishRavenX
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the last line...the revenge of the bushy hair. I\'m looking forward to reading more!!!
person Louise
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2 is so good! I just can\'t wait to see where you are going to go with this story. Please post more!
person Snapeaholic
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I need a new pair of knickers now! Wow!
person Sirius Star Holder
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! ;) Keep up the good work & update soon!!!! (=^-^=)

~*Sirius Star Holder*~

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