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for Goodnight, Demon Slayer

by PotionsMistressM

person Gia
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great cliffie!! Can\'t wait to see who\'s a-knockin\' on the door. Feel better soon, PMM. Hugs~Gia
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Parts 16 & 17, Chapter Fourteen: Isn
person GrrArrg
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hope you\'re better, missed you!!

Things I loved were:

No, culture had jilted Hermione. Love was supposed to be hugs and puppies, not blurting out stupid things for no apparent reason - Ah love sweet love!!

No, there would be no repeat of the \"oright\" debacle today - Laughed so hard that I spit Vanilla diet coke out over my keyboard!!

She would be ready for him. Today, she would be like a lioness, carefully sussing out her situation and ever-ready to pounce on her prey.
\"Morning, Hermione.\"
DAMN! - the best laid plans.....!!

Silly, silly British man & forsoddingever- I love those lines!!

Smutty smut smut - Yeah baby!!

Evil cliffie - Oooh!!

More soon
Love ya loads
GrrArrg (Most glamorous yet tasteful one)
person Rosie
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is a good thing to say at the end of a chapter!
person S. Grey
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was crueD ShD She was so close to getting laid. ^^- What a pity. Please, do continue. I think that you portray Snape very well, as a side note. So neh. xP
person ArienAstera
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I laughed so hard at the \"oright\" thing. I do that far to many times than I\'d like to admit. I actually managed to make a whole new catch-phrase! But dammit all to hell! They were so close! AARRGGHH!! Next chapter then...

Or else...

ArienAstera
person ancientgirl
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, that last line had a rather ominous sound. I loved this chapter, but you are evil leaving us and them all hot and bothered. Please update soon.
person Sabrina
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
uh oh I have a feeling someone is going to be dead. Please update soon.
person ash
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great
person spaz141
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Thanks for the update.
I hope real life and your health improve.
L&K LM#4 (2 1/2 weeks to go before baby is due)

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