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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok just read chappie 1: like this story, and I hardly ever like a stroy. I don\'t love it, but I might. You\'re OC is quite interesting, she\'s not a typical one is she? I like \'em a little bitchy ei? :D Your Draco seems quite my type as well.
You have a few spelling mistakes (yes righ listen to the expert:D), I just found out today that MRS is spelt missus so I don\'t know ght ght be wrong, buma pma pretty sure that BEAR is how you spell Bear....:D you know teddybear man, it just buggs me the way you spell it. Also at some point you make Fay talk in first person, it;s confusing, one senance it\'s \"I SAID\" and then it\'s \"SHE SOMETHING\" ... you know what I mean. This you\'re just missing your proof reading. :D:D:D
Now I really want to know why Fay lost her memory.... really excited:D:D:D great start, and it\'s quite wickeat sat she\'s in Slytherin. Anyway off to read more.... I hope there is more, if there isn\'t then UPADATE SOON. and keep up, hugs Faithful:D
You have a few spelling mistakes (yes righ listen to the expert:D), I just found out today that MRS is spelt missus so I don\'t know ght ght be wrong, buma pma pretty sure that BEAR is how you spell Bear....:D you know teddybear man, it just buggs me the way you spell it. Also at some point you make Fay talk in first person, it;s confusing, one senance it\'s \"I SAID\" and then it\'s \"SHE SOMETHING\" ... you know what I mean. This you\'re just missing your proof reading. :D:D:D
Now I really want to know why Fay lost her memory.... really excited:D:D:D great start, and it\'s quite wickeat sat she\'s in Slytherin. Anyway off to read more.... I hope there is more, if there isn\'t then UPADATE SOON. and keep up, hugs Faithful:D