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for Beneath the Surface

by Sharkdiver

person *sigh*
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do you know the word, "update?"
person Alyce
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if that bit of wine intoxicated anyone... Anyway, please update soon. I read a lot of Snape fics and this is one of my favorites. Snape and Hermione living together is just such a great plot bunny.
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interested to see what becomes of this fic. :) Really good beginning!
person naynay_r
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. You managed to capture Snape so well. Keep up the great work!
person randomficreader
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am definately loving your fic! Please update soon! There aren\'t grammar errors, yay!
person Ada
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful story! I can\'t wait to see what happens next! Keep going, I love it!!!!
person ancientgirl
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I\'m glad he apologized to her and I\'m glad she wasn\'t a total bitch about him going into the bathroom. I love how you ended it. Mmmm that silky voice.
person Titania
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh. I admire your incredible resistance to turn the bathroom scene into a lemon chapter. You dear have a strong will!.

hee hee

Anyway. Not sure if I have reviewed before, but here it is.

Like the story thus far. Am waiting for more. Charaters are totally IN charater. I can actually see Hermione making a pass at Sev whilst under the influence! The undercurrents are HOT HOT HOT! DUCK! She\'s gonna blow! ( no pun intended!)

Waiting for the next.

Live long and prosper!
nia nia
author of The Wedding Planner and Remember When It Rained
person Ava
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. This is a fantastic fic and i can\'t wait for an update. Just please don\'t rush the plot so that Hermione and Severus get together straight away - the chase is the best bit ;-)
person Regina
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely *love* this story! The plot is delightful, the characters are true to form, and the writing style is most refreshing! I am terribly eager to see what will transpire between the Gryffindor \"Know-It-All\" and the snarky Potions Master! (After all, the Hermione Granger and Severus Snape pairing is my *personal* favorite!) Tha :-) :-)

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