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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I dearly love this story. It is very beautiful. I am enjoying the lines from Eliot and Cummings and Celan. Please keep writing as I am looking forward to the further development and completion of your tale. I especially love the fact that your Snape is very dark an did not go all fluffy over the child.
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying this immensely. Snape and Aubrey are a joy!
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this. Great stuff, good characterizations. Thank you for not making Snape turn all fluffy; I hate when that happens.
By the way, who (or what) is David Yum? I tried doing a search on Amazon and came up empty-handed.
By the way, who (or what) is David Yum? I tried doing a search on Amazon and came up empty-handed.
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really nicely written story; the last chapter had me on the floor with Aubrey\'s conversation with Snape. Bravo! Well done! Thank you so much.
Helen
Helen
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I sooooo enjoyed their interaction Bravo!
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Oh man. Aubrey is a crack up. More soon please.
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! i couldn\'t imagine a meeting of those two that didn\'t erupt in name calling or bloodshed. please update soon! aloha, mele
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8... I LOVE this chapter, Aubrey is an AMAZING original character!!! I very much enjoy the conversations that she has with her mother as well as her attitude toward Severus being her father!!! I have a feeling that she is gowing to grow on him wether he likes it or not, she\'s not going to give him a choice!!!
I am looking forward to their shopping trip as well as seeing how the relationship between these 3 grows & changes!!! Til chapter 9, Deb >^..^<
I am looking forward to their shopping trip as well as seeing how the relationship between these 3 grows & changes!!! Til chapter 9, Deb >^..^<
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As I read this the stray quote \"and a child shall lead them...\" came to me. This is quite lovely and your precocious Aubrey is a wonderful character. You\'ve done a terrific job of blending Hermione and Severus into a small child. Let\'s here it for genetic memory!
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hate typos... this is the corrected note.... \'let\'s hear it for genetic memory.\'