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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know, I love SS/HG stories and think they are the best, but I have a feeling this story will have Hermione yelling all the time, trying to justify what she did....yes, rape is wrong, but this man has been without knowledge of a child he helped create for 9 years...how would Hermione feel if the shoe was on the other foot? If Severus took the child away for the next 9 years? Sometimes I think that would be justified...and the only reason she came back now is because she needs something.
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is beautiful...it\'s so intriguing. I like your Sev and Aubrey. Will be waiting for continuation. Thank you very much :)
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your English is terrific! I would never have guessed it\'s your second language, not your first. I enjoyed Aubrey\'s meeting Severus for the first time. I\'m curious about the blonde hair - would that be a Granger trait, perhaps? Anyway, I\'m looking forward to more!
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A lovely title for what looks likely to be a dark and beautiful work of fiction.
And, so far, what a story this is! Your English is faultless, and I am further
impressed by your wonderful imagery and characterisation. I very much
look forward to reading more, soon.
Until then, Blessed Be.
Kait
And, so far, what a story this is! Your English is faultless, and I am further
impressed by your wonderful imagery and characterisation. I very much
look forward to reading more, soon.
Until then, Blessed Be.
Kait
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This looking good and interesting. I\'m looking forward to reading it. Please don\'t stop writing it.
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I stumbled across this story at aff. I wondered how soon you would update and here it is. I look forward to its continuation. I would not worry about English as a second language, it you had not mentioned it I never would have suspected you were not a native speaker. I think that you are handling the circumstances of the story very well. I will look for further updates.
Mary Kay
Mary Kay
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! Aubrey is such a darling little girl...she could give Snape a run for his money! So...will you be updating soon?
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was great! I am loving this fic. I really like the girl, she seems very cannon. I can\'t wait to see what happens next.
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so great. I am so excited to see how this all plays out. I love the little girl. How cuters is she? Standing up to Snape like that? hehe Please Update soon!