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for Beauty

by SStar

person Juliette (not really)
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. And it works out so much better this way, too.
person Alexa
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good. So good. I\'m a little worried about how right it feels, but I think I get it. I\'m... glad for Draco. He sucseeded in getting to the core of his exsistence and reality, with no enxiety to stop him. Wow, he is the definition of a masohist in Freudian theory (and they are a happy bunch). Would you mind it if I used this story for a paper of mine?
person Swiftrunner
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sick, I like it. I loved the last paragraphs and line. Kudos to you for making my blood curdle.

Thanks.

Swiftrunner.
person slychick25877
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow what a dark story i liked it
person Chloe
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is one of the reasons why it\'s called Adult Fanfiction! Very creative!!!
person MoglitheWitch
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Phantastic! This is disturbing and entrancing at the same time... I\'m normall Har Harry&Draco-fan, but your story is ly gly great and I\'m glad I\'ve read it! It\'s like a poem...

Thanks!

Yours

Mogli the Witch

ps: Please excuse my mistakes - I am no native speaker.
person Chen Li
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG. OMFG S-STAR!!! I CANT BELIEVE THAT THIS IS REALLY YOU!!! IT\'S STORM-PIETRO!!! FROM FF.NET!!! I\'ve migrated to aff.net here, and I\'ve just finished fiery speed in ff.net and i\'m just starting out here, reviewing stuff and taking a look.
and here i was, wondering why the hell youn\'tn\'t update yo pytro fic.
*sighs*.
Anyway, brilliant evil mind that you\'ve gotten in Draco, and of course, there\'s a thin line between love and hate.
person Tricia
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was beautifully written. You could have gone overboard with the run-on sentences, but you didn\'t. It flowed very well and kept my attention. I\'m not even into bloodplay, but I could see the appeal of it for Draco. Wonderful job.
person Kaela
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is the most beautiful thing I\'ve ever read. The ending was a slight bit weak but I know how hard it is to end things like that and I praise you for how you did it. I\'ll be thinking of this for days.
person Tarallynne Moon
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was incredibley creepy, psychotic, and very sexy. It\'s kinda squicky, but i like it. Very nice, luv.

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