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for He\'s Come Undone

by Sim

person star
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Is there any way the draco and hermione can get together? I really hope she doesn\'t give up her baby. Anyway keep up the good work! And write for yourself ok
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person tab{
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like...More Please.
person egastin
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story so far. can\'t wait to see the rest of it.
person elementaldeity
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love HGDM pairings, I understood where you were going with the plot in the first few chapters, although I do wish they were longer, but I understand. Post more soon. This sounds like it has a good pretense.

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person Narc
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hene ane and Draco both totally deserve each other... they\'re both scanky! Ginny needs to kick both their asses, divorce the Draco-ho and take everything he owns, then move to Bermuda with Oliver Wood--where he waits on her hand and foot. --Leaving Draco and Hermione to live on the street to pimp sex for food. What scum they are!
person calicat
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Definatly interesting. I see you are making a point to slowly show us why certian things are happening. Thank you for that, but more is needed. There is only one thing that really bothers me, aside from thet tht that D/HR ships are not usually my thing, is why, if Draco loved Hermione so much, why would he put everything aside and marry Ginny, then try to degrade Hermione by making her his mistriss. I would think that Draco would have to have a VERY strong reason for that, and in my opinion it can\'t be just that Gin was pregnant by his father and he wanted to help her. I know it is your story, just trying to tell you what I think. Looking forward to the next chap.
person deedee
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I guess this partial flashback kind of explains why Lucius is not with Ginny. He probably just wanted the affair and then took off when he found out she was pregnant, right? If that is the reason, why did Ginny still want to keep the baby? Did she really want to keep the baby? And what happened to Draco and Hermione? Please write more:)
person deedee
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I guess this chapter did clear somethings up, but I think I need the flashbacks. Why would Ginny not understand about Draco and Hermione\'s relationship? I mean it\'s not like Ginny and Draco married for love. Why would Draco be willing to lose the love of his life in order to marry Ginny? Please update soon:)
person Amy
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is a really good start to a story! I wanna know now whats going on, what happened to Hermione/ her baby, and who Draco will end up with! Keep writing, great job!!!
person May Bird
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why can\'t Hermione bth Dth Draco???!!! it\'s not fair and i think Draco should leave Ginny

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