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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work. OH. UPDATE ALREADY.
schedule
March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I think you are doing a really good job so far. I agree a little with Ginny, but I think it makes your stories yours. Besides allot of people do it. It lets you visualize whats happening. Keep up the good work. Oh and one more thing don\'t make it so long. Try not to pass ten chapters most people don\'t like long stories.
schedule
March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a pretty good start, but you should look it over and keep an eye out for spelling and grammatical errors.