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for The Seduction Game

by Grill

person MoMalfoy
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely loved your story!! great plot. and i also noticed that a lot of HG/SS stories where they are married and have children, always have snape having at least one boy. but i liked the fact that you had him with two daughters! that was adorable! again...great story. hope to see more of your stories here! :-) Mo
person dragon34
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really don\'t care how you ended your story, I loved it. I knew Draco\'s lover was Harry, just by the way you kept it a secret. I really think that those two make the perfect couple. I really hope you write more for this site.

If your up to taking suggestions, it be great to see something like LM/HG, or LM/GW. He\'s too sexy to forget. I like Severus, but he is about over written now a days. I think it might be time to give the other older guys a chance. I would write about him, but the three stories I have now are consuming me.


jeannette
person June
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 30 - THANK YOU for the epilogue and new chapter! Poor Severus, perhaps his younger daughter who takes after him will be easier, since he understands her....maybe. Are both girls Slytherins?
person SteffieSnape
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! I simply love this story... it\'s brilliant! You know my favorite part has got to be the scene when Hermione is standing on Snape\'s balcony and she, under the slight influence of alcohol, asks him \"Does yours?\" GODS! It was so damn perfect I had to re-read it over and over again! LOL! I enjoy that scene so much that I occasionally go back and read it for no reason at all! Just brilliant! And now she\'s pregnant? How sweet... I just hope it really IS Severus\' and not that bastard\'s Lucius! ECK! But as you said, or Hermy rather, it couldn\'t possibly be Lucius\' child because it would be far to soon. The timing is perfect of course for Snape... I just hope Hermy keeps the baby and doesn\'t give it away or anything. AGH! Well anyway... I really enjoy this story and I can\'t wait for the updates. WOO! Keep writing and thanx for this wonderful story! YAY! Toodles!

~SteffieSnape
person cryingoddess
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
still waiting for an update :( love the stori though ^_^
person Mizzy
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great story! Keep writing-- you\'re good at it! :)
person NobisSolumNon
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hurry and update! I want to see a mini severus on the way! You have to update, or else... umm... no cookies! HA!
person cryingoddess
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
urgh the suspense is killing me, come on please update soon? please please please
person Kitsune Rose
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great so far, hurry and update for me! And tell me, will Sev become a father?????
person cryingodess
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update soon!!! im glad they got bak together :)

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