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Chapter 19... THANK YOU for another GREAT chapter!!! I really do like the way you are writing each of these characters!
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I do so LOVE Angelica, she has a good heart (though not in the literal sense), a wonderful personality & an attitude that can keep Severus in line!!!

I am happy that Narcissa decided not to accept Severus\' proposal!!! I just wish that Draco would have been gone before they started talking BECAUSE....

I HATE it when people assume things & then pass that assumption on to others when they\'ve only heard part of a conversation!!! Poormiormione:( I can\'t wait to see how things go when she goes to Hogwarts!!! I can just see her half heartedly congratulating Severus on his engagement & then him grabbing her & kissing her senseless..... okay, I am hoping A LOT;-) Or maybe the 1st thing he should do is take her to meet Angelica so she can find out what Hermione is really feeling, tell him & then he can kiss her & then explain what really happened after he leaves her breathless!!! Can we say that Deb REALLY wants Severus & Hermione to GET BUSY!!!

Really, really looking forward to MORE!!! Til chapter 20, Deb >^..^<

i\'m up for adoption lol i\'m quiet i dont eat much lol i love nervous Severus... so much i will have to kidnap him and force him to marry me. another great chapter

Good story! I\'m well and truly hooked on it. (and it looks like someone has finally told you that \'it is\'--it\'s--has postpostrophe, while \'its\' as in \'the doorknob belong to it\' does not, which means that it\'s spelled \'its\'.) Hiyo, Grammar Nazi, away!

Chapter 18... This is a FANTASTIC chapter!!! I LOVE the way Severus is talking to himself & all he lhe little sexual slips, too funny!!! They are both so nervous, to be expected, but that will change in time!!! I can just imagine how they are feeling now, good start, lots of time together to look forward to... they will be fine, well I\'m hoping for better than fine!!!

I do like how Severus decided what to wear, put him in a much better mind set than his teaching robes & allowed him to show a different side of himself!!! I do think that the end is my favorite part.....

Still holding her hand he looked up - Merlin\'s robe the dazed look was back. Perhaps this wasn\'t a result of the curse, instead a reaction to him? Damn, he wouldn\'t get to throttle Potter after all.

As always I will be anxiously waiting for the next chapter!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<

I love gentlemanly Snape! Very hot. Keep up the good work. I\'m enjoying every minute!

oh YEA!!! Wonderful chapter :) The slow build up is sooo much nicer than the \"jump into bed and get it on\" apph. ah.

Very powerful first chapter. I thought the ending was very dramatic and settled the reader into the mood. I also thought that unansered questions were well done so I look forward to the next chapter. Your rich discriptions draw the reader into the emotions you are building. Good work.

Angsty severus! i like !!!!!!! i\'ll be back tomorrow for more!

I am happy to see Sev looking more at Hermione than Narcissa but I know Narcissa isn\'t gone. The story wouldn\'t be fun without her :) I loved Dumbledore here, he is so evil, I love it!!! The last sentence about his legs has to be one of the greatest ending lines I have ever seen. That just struck me as hilarious. Everyone always focuses on his voice but I loved what you did. Thanks for the great work and looking foward to more great stuff!

Excellent chapter! Can\'t wait to see what happens with the next one... maybe Narcissa goes away for me. She\'s not stupid, she\'s gotts see that Severus is in love with someone else! She can\'t want to be second best. I can alway hope.