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for Angelica's Sorrow

by devsgma

person appy lady
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter! I loved Severus in \"his\" storm, that is exactly how I feel during a good storm! (Strange, I know, but there is something about the power...)
person jonelin
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"\'Bloody hell, I forgot she\'d know what wrappings they use. She received an order. I\'m dead,\' he concluded while drinking the dregs of his tea. \'The last peaceful day before mayhem and I\'m dead.\'\"
BWAHAHA!!! that\'s what severus gets for being such a cad! a paranoid cad, at that!
person Lindsay
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah check this out http://www.annsummers.com/ i cant wait for the next chapter
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25... Another GREAT chapter!!! I really like how their relationship is growing!!! His statement about so much intelligence being wrapped in such a delectable package was so sexy!!! I bet that & their morning had to have earned him some brownie points!!!

I do enjoy the humor you added here & there!!! I LOVE the bit about the early riser & I do think that Severus is just a tad anxious to get his own catalog;-)

Their conversation about Angelica was interesting!!! I am hoping that they will be able to a d a descendent of her\'s, I think it will be good for her!!!

It seems that Minerva is a bit protective of Severus so her conversation with Hermione made perfect sense!!! I guess that she found out that Hermione\'s intentions are honest*
person jonelin
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i have an idea of where this might go, but i\'m not saying in case i\'m wrong! :) great chapter.
person CAH
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The calm before the storm!!! Wonder what the students will say...Severus and Hermione are taking things at just the right pace! Love it :)
person Lindsay
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
he is sooooooo sneaky ..i wonder what he ordered????? hmmmm will we find out tomorrow?
person CAH
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What is Severus going to tell her I wonder? Loved the ending of the chapter!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24... I think this chapter was a perfect size & covered quite a lot!!! I am so glad that Hermione & Angelica seem to have hit it off so well!!! I am looking forward to future meetings between the 2!!! I think it was a FANTASTIC touch to allow her to only speak to one at a time & I like that she wanted Severus gone to get more open answers, PERFECT!!!

Speaking of PERFECT, the last scene was aose ose as it gets!!! I LOVE the horndog Severus!!! Sounds lHermHermione will not only be getting some new underthings, but got a well ready Severus Snape compliments of her Fredericks catalog!!!

Looking forward to Severus & Hermione discussing her visit to Angelica as well as his next trip to visit with her!!! To be honest, I\'m just looking forward to everything that will be the next chapter!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
person Lindsay
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooooohhhhh!!!!! maybe I should show Severus a ann summers catalog lol great chapter ...

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