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Hey loved the story keep it coming!

A problematic continuation (as far as I\'m concerned) to a good beginning. I have several issues concerning chapters four and five and I\'ll try to explain them as clearly as possible:

- Lupin and Snape\'s fight; first of all, it\'s not completely clear when, where and why their argument had erupted. How come Lupin knows what happened during Hermione\'s interrogation? Did Snape give some sort of report to the teaching staff? Secondly, the way you choose to unroll the scene makes the whereabouts as well as the fight\'s actual enfolding very difficult to follow. Who said what, and when? I did love the two characters\' interaction

Hi, everybody, I\'m the author. I\'m just writing a note to let you know how much I appreciate your feedback, and to reassure you that I certainly bear it in mind in writing the new episodes (I am actually writing this

This is awesome. I love it. Poor hermione . . . poor snape. What is going on? Write more soon.
- Damia -

I\'m intrigued, please continue.

Keep going. An interesting approach I look forward to reading more of.
Da Feather

If it will make you happy, I will tell you I love the story. Which I really do, and I cant waitreadread the next chapter.

Wow! Another update! I really love this so far, and it\'s definitely intriguing. I look forward to your next update. Just one questioaybeaybem jum just ignorant, or perhaps it\'s a British/European thing (that an uncultured American, such as myself, would be unfamiliar with), but what is a samovar?

I am so lost! In a good way though.
I am enjoying this a lot and so glad
to see all the updates on it.

Very interesting so far. You description of Hermione being stimulated by the submissi ori oriented aspects of the interrogation, goes very well with her canon characterizations (those Snape, being biased, isn\'t aware if, thinking of her as the Golden Trio\'s third side), and for that- well done.

However, certain parts in the story inspire a sense of