rate_review Reviews

Your story is very interesting.....each chapter ends in ways that make me want the next chapter NOW...which i think is a good thing.......my suggestion for you is to make Hermione and SNape fall in love.....which is my suggestion for any HG/SS story....your ideas are good....I can honestly say I have not read this before......and I want Filch to get in so much trouble that they will be collecting his pieces off the great hall walls.....ooops......i typed that didn\'t I?

Just one small suggestion. The story would be easier to read if you could separate the paragraphs. Ioks oks too bunched up. Other than that its rather nice so far. I\'m glad she admitted to Oblivating his memory, although I\'m not sure why she did it in the first place.

wow...great story...can\'t wait to read what happens next.

I\'m surprised she obliviated him, but if you are asking for suggestions as to where to go from here you could always have her stay in his quarters and have her tell him he invited her there for a \"talk\". Maybe she could explore those dreams on her last night at the school.