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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... the plot thickens. Gay guys. Yay!!! Oh wait, what\'s his face is, like, dead. Sigh. On to the next chapter then.
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
v short chapter
Advice: make it longer by making it more detailed. It is more interesting to read and stuff
Can\'t wait for ch 5 though!!
Keep writing or I\'ll kill you
Advice: make it longer by making it more detailed. It is more interesting to read and stuff
Can\'t wait for ch 5 though!!
Keep writing or I\'ll kill you
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was very sweet, but it\'s not adult fanfiction. You probably should move it to a different site because this site is for R and NC-17 stories, yours wasn\'t more than a G from what I could tell. Not criticizing the story, just where you chose to post it.
fanfin.nen.net, fictionalley might be better choices.
fanfin.nen.net, fictionalley might be better choices.