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person Sabrina
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story is great. I like the way u have made Snapes character. Please keep writing!
person Miki
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Laughing as bunnies gather round author...in attempt to force yet more chapters from author. Yay!!! Wait...is that the author creeping out the door with all the story stored inside their head. ARRGGHH!!!! Anyway, I am a reluctant fan. Love your other pieces as well. Keep the chappies rolling. Thanks!
person Megan
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a FUN fanfiction. I absolutely believe the world you\'ve created. I love how Hermione and Snape interact. Write more, and soon!!
person XxphenixX
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic fic, darling. I love that Hermione, y, ay, and Malfoy go back, as opposed to the usual only Hermione or something like that. Makes it much more amusing. Ron\'s bewilderment and trademark confusion at everyone\'s disappearance was such a movie moment. Love the portrayal of Lily and Remus\'s attempted groveling on behalf of James. Now how could you leave us with such a cliffie? Have not bunnbunnies come back to yell at you? If they\'re no longer threatening you, I\'end end my own bunny on you. Not a plot bunny, no. (If I had any of those, I\'d be using \'em meself.) My bunny, whom I named Lucy - after Lucy Lawless from Xena and Lucy from \"I Love Lucy\" - is actually quite ferocious when she wants to be. Not really. But she does like eating shoes. That\'s it! She\'ll eat your shoes! So update!
person LoveThePotionBoy
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, what could this mean? Poor Harry. \"Be careful what you wish for...\" Got a bit confused in the middle as to POV, but soon sorted it out. I\'ve been awake too long. Excellent chapter, Kait x
person rubberduck
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is certainly a great start. i starttart because after three chapters, they are just heading back now. it was surprising that draco is included in the trip, but a welcome twist. i am however disappointed that this story is in the hermione/snape category. that\'s not really my favourite pairing, but since they are going back in time, it should be interesting to see how hermione deals with a teenage snape. the characters are very nicely developed, even harry\'s manic reactions. now for something negative. youe mae many spelling errors scattered throughout the chapters. spelling errors are easy to fix though. i\'m not worried about them too much. i am worried about when the next chapter comes out. leaving it as a cliffhanger is a dirty, sneaky trick. you sly fox you.
person tifsuz
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your stories and look forward to seeing where you take this one. It should definatly be interesting with a slightly crazed Harry and vengeful (sp?) Draco along!
person snapesdaughter
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think you have a wonderful begging and should keep ue goe good work
person laceyweasl
schedule February 23, 1920 at 12:00 AM
I just left a review but I was kicked off and I\'m not sure if you got it. You deserve two anyway. This is an excellent story and I felt like I just won some money when I realized there was an update. Thank you!

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