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Hey i really love this story. I was just wondering if you were planning on completing it ot not.

*sob* are you ever going to update this. I really enjoy this story and i want to see it continued please continue it soon. *puppy eyes* please

It\'s Sunday, and I sit here crying... You really need to update; Verno and gang need their comeuppance and right quick.

Hi, I just want to let you know that I really do like this story and I have never come across a plot such like this and the idea (to me) is very original and interesting. I do, however, have some details to point out to you that would make the reading this story even easier.
First off I want to say that this in no way, is meant to be a flame. I really do like where this story is going and I want to read more.
Anyway, the first thing I want to point out to you is that when you use the word \"not\'t\" for example \"does not\'t\" you don\'t need the extra t and apostrophy (\'). You should simply spell it \"does not\". It was easy to ignore at first but I noticed it was happening a lot and thought I should point it out to you (sorry, if someone else has pointed it out already).
The second thing that I want to mention is that when your chapters are posted online, whoever is reading them has to scroll the window to the right to finish reading a paragraph. It makes it very tedius for readers to be moving the screen back and forth to read it properly. I don\'t know how you would personally fix this (perhaps limiting the length of each line to say... 70 or 80 characters), but I just wanted to let you know that it was happening.
Again, this is not meant to be a flame, just a construcive (and hopefully helpful) review.
Please take into concideration what I said. I am looking forward to reading more chapters.
Take care, Cassie

I was so hoping you\'d continue! I really want chapter 7!

Very moving; I am enjoying your story quite a bit.

i really like this story please update again becase i see u havent updated in a while please please please

crsytal

Wait a minute, Draco just locked a seven-year-old in a closet for 2 and a half hours and all he gets is an \"i\'m disapointed in you\"? That\'s sickening!

i have stumbled upon your story! i hope you continue it... please... it\'s really good...

At first I ws liitle bit sceptic bout this kind of story... but then, when I started to red - I got realy interested, these emotions nd everything... it\'s good story.