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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3.... So now we know who took Hermione & that her friends have been looking for her!!! I am kind of hoping that Severus will recognize her even through the glamour charm!!!
I do like the basic idea of your story & am looking forward to watching its progress!!! The one thing that I did notice was that there were quite a few spelling errors (I know I make them in my reviews too*
I do like the basic idea of your story & am looking forward to watching its progress!!! The one thing that I did notice was that there were quite a few spelling errors (I know I make them in my reviews too*
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m definietely likeing . Ne.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Like I said before I like it so far and can\'t wait to read the rest. I will be checking up regularly to see what you make of it.
Just a quick thing. You do seem to have a few errors in there, but nothing that a beta won\'t fix. Other than that....nothing to complain about.
ArienAstera
Just a quick thing. You do seem to have a few errors in there, but nothing that a beta won\'t fix. Other than that....nothing to complain about.
ArienAstera
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! thanks for giving this a go!! I\'m really excited about reading it. I like it so far. Keep it up!!
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1 & 2... This is something different than I have read & am curious to see where you take it!!! I am also curious to see why no one has come after her as well as what Severus\' part will be in all of this!!! Til chapter 3, deb >^..^<
P.S., Who was it that kidnapped her?
P.S., Who was it that kidnapped her?