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by shelia

person LucKyo
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'll start off by saying, this story is bloody amazing. Although I'm a lazy bum about reviewing, I will admit to religiously following this story. Has a deeply involving plot. Again, please just keep doing what you do best. ^_^
person Sophie
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to say anymore. You are an awesome writer and you will always be. The quote you put on top of chapter 5 has been my motver ver since I laid a hand on one of my father's philosophy books. Don't know how you found that one. But you're great and I wish you would update Mosaics more frequently. But don't get too stressed. Whatever it is that keeps you from updating might be more important. And we all have to accept that.
But please keep going. I'm stuck with this story. It's simply great and I check this page so often to see if you wrote another chapter. Just keep going. You are awesome!!!!
person LadyTuesday
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see you updating! Hope you're working your way through all your fics *coughcoughupdateHogwartsMensclubcoughcough*

^_^

Once again, masterfully done ... as usual.

Thanks
~~ ** Lady Tuesday ** ~~
person Mistress Candy
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story and the first one Damaged Goods! This is the first story I\'ve ever read that involves rape and the effects of it. You\'ve got me hooked on this story and I look forward to more. I\'ll be checking everyday for more. The Severus Snape and Marius Malfoy relationship interests me the most. I hope that more will be revealed. Your a tale wri writer and I thank you for feeding my imagination.
person Sophie
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m addicted to this story. I just gave a very close friend of mine, who has been abused by her father for years and loves fanfiction and she when she had read it, she came to me with tears in her eyes. She loved your story so much and hopes, just like I do, that you will find a happy ending for both Hermione and Severus.

I will wait some time, until you have written more chapters of Mosaics until I show it to her. But it\'s simply great the way you describe Lucius and I am looking forward to read how he will deal with his mother returning home and her motives to do so. I\'m also very curious as to how Hermione will cope when she will be told that she can do elemental magic.

I hope you will continue writing Mosaics very soon and again, if you need help in tranlations... my e-mail is above.

Keep going, Sophie
person deblovesdragon
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Andrian,
Is Hermione keeping a dream journal with the book that Severus gave her? She handled herself well with the Slytherins.
So, the crazy old loon is Lucius\'s mother. Figures that she was so cruel.
I look forward to more.
person LadyTuesday
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As always, your writing takes my breath away. Yet another marvelous installment. Please don\'t be a stranger in your updates!

~~ ** Lady Tuesday ** ~~
person wendynat
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this line: \"The purpose of my eyes is to see the world in all its beauty and horror and choose to focus on what I want, not what anyone else perceives.\"

Great chapter! I liked the DE meeting and Percy\'s request, particularly Sev\'s answer ;). And as for Lucius and Narcissa - I can\'t wait to see how the dynamics work with the mother in the picture now...
person Moise
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow please update soon, I cant wait to find out who the woman lizzie is looking after is called.
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Am I evil for thinking Lucius deserves every thing he\'s gotten? Oh well. Fantastic plot and writing, you should give yourself a pat on the back for this.

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