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for Hogwarts Online

by jonelin

person Avivafae
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was such a cute story. Filed with humor and intelligence. Be careful though, there are a lot of errors throughout the piece that make it hard to read.
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person jenocclumency (back from the offline world)
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Such a good ending! I really love this story -- you did a great job.
person Amanda
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I loved it!! Perfect ending :D
person Elise
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A perfect ending for a perfect story. I thought the whole thing was great and I\'m glad everything worked out for Hermione.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14... You did a FABULOUS job on this story & I have very much enjoyed it!!! The way that the curse was ended, her realizations about the letters & then putting her life back in order which included both of them admitting their love, WELL DONE!!! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!!! Please email me when you post your next story!!! Deb >^..^<
person devsgma
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ack - \'end\' - what do you mean \'end\'! Seriously, I do understand why you ended it there, but it doesn\'t make it any easier to accept. I\'m gonna miss this story. Does this mean you\'re going to start a new one? (Major hint dropping there in case you missed it.) I do like how you had the black smoke or vapor come out and change to white before it went back in. I assume she still has the scars - dang nab it. I was hoping that they would come up with something to change that for her.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13... What a FABULOUS chapter!!! I feel badly that Severus saw where Hermione was tortured, but it was a good thing as far as the family that lives there is concerned!!!

What a fantasy!!! I can just picture her making it very real*
person GFeather
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ehem... JUST WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING!!!!! Evil evil cliffy that was.... I was waiting for weeks and then you just leave it hanging there! *takes a deep breath* alright, I\'m fine, just anxious and increadibly eager to read the rest. You will post soon won\'t you? Please! Pretty Please! Pretty please with 10 scoops of Fetiscues ice cream and a chocolateg ong on top!
Expectantly,
Da Feather

Oh and by the way... it was a good chapter even with the cliffy.

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