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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey just started reading this and I\'m really liking it. I like how Snape is the student now and Hermione is the teacher, very nice.
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good. I am
really enjoying it. Thank you
for writing it. i have been
anxiously awaiting your updates.
please continue this great story
Vicki
really enjoying it. Thank you
for writing it. i have been
anxiously awaiting your updates.
please continue this great story
Vicki
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7... I like how things are moving along between them!!! I like how he used an excuse for going up & reading her log, made him happy*
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great chapter!
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m ry eny enjoying your story!
You have a slight problem with switching back and forth from present tense to past tense, and you need to work on that. Otherwise, you\'re a very good writer -- you\'re moving the plot along very smoothly. Can\'t wait to read more.
You have a slight problem with switching back and forth from present tense to past tense, and you need to work on that. Otherwise, you\'re a very good writer -- you\'re moving the plot along very smoothly. Can\'t wait to read more.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1 - 6... Finally got a chance to read your story & I am really liking it!!! I am looking forward to seeing how they behave toward each other the longer they are together!!! I am also curious to see if Harry & Ron will come into the mix somewhere along the line?!? Til chapter 7, Deb >^..^<
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
he, he, he. another great chapter! can\'t wait til hermione introduces him to the internet. will he find all the naughty sites? or will he bump into her e-friends and find out embarassing things? aloha, mele
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it! the story is moving quickly, covering a lot of ground. i look forward to the rest! aloha, mele
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you are off to a great start!!!!!! The story is interesting and i like this particular challenge. I\'m looking forward to seeing where you decide to tit. it.
Lily
Lily