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for Rainwater

by meklorka

schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
loved this story!The writings rather good and i love how it ended! Please let me know when the sequel is out. I'm intrested to know how it ends.
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Some of the sentances in the beginning are kinda long and drag on but i like the sentiment.
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh,
this was so hot and so sad at the same time !!
I just loved it and who ever told you that you are no good at writing sex scense is totally wrong ! I can't wait to read the sequel!
Keep on writing !

*hugs*
MD
person kunitsu
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that was hot and I want more so whens the sequel
person Melissa
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more I really love the anguish (sp?) in this story.
person Missi
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found your fic today. I really like it-it mentions a sequal, but I can\'t find it!
person nova
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really don\'t see how the sexual part was badly written, I thought it was very good actually:) As was the story.. and cute too (even if the end didn\'t sound too good)!^^ Waiting for the sequel!
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was wonderful, please continue with another chapter! you have such a nice, flowing style, I could not stop reading!! and a very creative plot twist i must say, poor sev needs a hug! thanks for the great story so far!! I hope you write more! I wbe cbe checking back!
person Serinthia
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Email me when you write the sequel please? Come to think of it, make sure you do write the sequel will you?
person Mei
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... just... wow. Really. *stares* yeah. sequel? sequel sounds good. Take Sev\'s guilt away. Gods, looking for a potion against guilt and then... this. Poor man. He must think himself a true monster now. Poor, poor man...

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