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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 14 - that was a great letter to Lucius! "Severus Perversity Snape" - poor guy, just like the late Rodney Dangerfield, Severus gets "no respect" from his wife! I'm glad she left him a chocolate bar.
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
and when will they get to sex? that is the question at hand...
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hip, hip, hooray!!!!
The reviewing system is working again!
I tried reviewing several times, and I also tried sending you and Ayla an e-mail. I hope you got it.
Anyway, I love your story! Don't worry about the smut, plot is more important! We may be a perverted bunch here at AFF.net (actually not all of us ^_^), but we do appreciate plot. Keep it up, and thank you for all your hard work! ^_^
The reviewing system is working again!
I tried reviewing several times, and I also tried sending you and Ayla an e-mail. I hope you got it.
Anyway, I love your story! Don't worry about the smut, plot is more important! We may be a perverted bunch here at AFF.net (actually not all of us ^_^), but we do appreciate plot. Keep it up, and thank you for all your hard work! ^_^
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh heh.. Loved it! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! it's one that I realy look forward to being updated. this latest chapter was awsome! I can't wait to see more
leila
leila
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I tried reviewing this when you first posted it tht the review thing was down, so I thought I'd try again. I love this story, actually I love your writing, I think you could write obituaries and they'd be funny and interesting (wanna re-write my text books?). This story is brilliant, and while smut is good, it would seem out of place to early in this story.
I look forward to seeing more updates with baited breath
Maggie
I tried reviewing this when you first posted it tht the review thing was down, so I thought I'd try again. I love this story, actually I love your writing, I think you could write obituaries and they'd be funny and interesting (wanna re-write my text books?). This story is brilliant, and while smut is good, it would seem out of place to early in this story.
I look forward to seeing more updates with baited breath
Maggie
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Umbrige!o...o....I'm suffering cold chills and clammy sweats. So, well done to you. This is my favorite of the marriage stories thus far. Snape is oh-so-cuttingly in character, and that ghastly "wedding night"! You are brilliant. Many authors would have been tempted to go the secret spark/eg fantastic sex route. I thought it much more in character mor both of them to have a dismal time. Neither of them would enjoy being forced into that. Thank you ever so much for the lovely read!
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dadadadaaa and the plot thickens...tee hee hee. I am out of my mind but I know when I read a good story. And this is one of the best i've read.
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww... I've just gotten to the end of chapter 4, and I really wish that you had had her marry Draco, seduce Lucius and have the two of them rule the world.... That idea is SO appealing to me! ;-)
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! Please update this soon. Hermy should fall for Sev and then they can sleep togther and have a happy ending...yay.