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for Forever Wanting

by DarceyFate

person ARose8578
schedule October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that this story was well put together and had some humor to it.
schedule December 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Its cute. I like that rons good with it and how they just layed on the bed makingout. Ots a good start.
schedule December 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for apologizing for the non descriptive sex scene. Liked that hr liked the prep though. Im glad tthe trio is back together. I cant say id be mad if ron chose the cute strawberry-blond as long as they are good together and hermione is good with someone else. Btw strawberry-blond is yummy lol.
schedule December 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ron being an ass and gettig killed. I love it that Harry has a pet sname to talk to.the end about Filch had me laughing hysterically for like 10 mins.
person Lady X
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok so good story up until the end. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY to short. you cut to much out. what about all the in between bits?? although i like the bit about Herm and Ginny. that was cute. If you do decide on a sequel please e-mail me with the update.
person alysha
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was great! yay!!!!!! but u never said what happened to alexis! lol

alysha
person redrose
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked this and sorry for not reviewing the other chapters. I really wanted to see whappeappened next! I like how Filch died - lol! And I was guessing that Hermione and Ginerva would get together. What happened to Ron? Or did I miss that? I should re-read. When I saw the summary I thought it would be Dark!Harry but then I was like \"oh...just fluffy goth\" but I took an inrest and I\'m glad I did because i really like this story. I love Alexis, she\'s my favorite and I think she\'s so sweet sounding. I think the ending was too short and a sequel would be awesome! Like,maybe you could write a prequel about how Draco was assked to kill (capture) Harry and his growing attraction and you could end it at their first real kiss or soemthing. And the necklace was a great idea! I\'m surprised that Harry got a boa but I like it a lot \'cause he needed the omfort. No offense to Darcy (aka you) but she\'s a shit that needed to get bitten. I was like \"OMG-WTF?!\" when she kissed him. He\'s with Harry! I am surprised that Harrver ver got punished for the Ron joke but that\'s okay. I hate Ron and his tiny dick! LOL - poor Hermione, losing her virginity to that. She\'d have been better off with a toy. Well, I really liked this fic so I hope to see more of it. <3 Rose Eva
person Corki
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please make sequel i love this story i love harry goth
person starlitRena
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woot to Filch\'s demise! The story was great, but that is my favorite part. A perfect way for that man to die.
person Shenoa
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU FINISHED IT!!!! T you you thank you thank you. I love this story lol. A sequel\'s up to you. Just keep writing

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