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*whistles* Interesting. I love it already. Simply because of the dream. I was sitting here, thinking

Seems like Dudley

Bastards. Fucking Dursleys. I want Severus to get mad and mean and evil and blow something up. It

Tehehe, good one, I'm enjoying this story, please continue... I wonder, how soon will it be before Severus jumps Harry or Harry jumps Severus?

I was so pleased to find this again. I was contemplating doing one of those anoying fic searches in the hope of finding it. I had of course hoped that it would be far larger by now, but I was happy to just be able to read chapter one again (that dream is so hot!) I wasn't sure if you were planning to continue with this story, and I seriously hope you do.
I would like to suggest that you consider getting a beta reader to catch some of the minor wording errors that detract from your story. There were a few times that you used similar sounding words in place of a more appropriate one such as: (away) instead of awake; (hand) in place of hang; and (sense) instead of since.
I am sorry you stopped writing due to negative reviews and hope that you continue for those of us that are enjoying your story.

Please write more i love your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am enjoying this story. I like how you are writing it.

cdk

I really like this story and what I've read so far; I can't wait to read more. Keep up the very good work.~Sophia

omg, this is awesome! please update it! I know it's been awhile, but please please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luv lots,
Vanna

I'm really enjoying this story so far, Harry angst never gets old :) and a quick question, are you the same Nikita who published Friends and foes of Harry Potter on Outskirts Press?